DO IT TREE!

Sunday, August 22, 2004

Naturally, I will.

Watch the adverbs. They are pretty things: useful, fun, modifiers. But jeez, too many of them can make you sound hesitant, like you don't have anything to say, like you're more concerned with ornamentation than substance. That would be bad.

That's my writing lesson for the day and notice - no adverbs.

And yes, I did have to come back and remove a "really".

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